My niece wouldn’t let me turn off her lamp last night.
She’s six, and she slept in her shoes.
Then she asked me to COUNT TO A HUNDRED with her.
Josie’s been staying with me three nights a week since March, because my sister picked up doubles at the hospital and her new husband doesn’t do bedtimes.
The second bedroom in my apartment is hers now. Purple sheets, a mushroom lamp, a water cup with a whale sticker peeling off the side.
“Aunt Megan, you forgot the water,” she said, every single night, and every single night I did forget it.
So when she asked about the counting, I just started counting.
At eighty-four she said that was enough, because that’s usually when the game is over.
I asked her what game. She said the one where you lie still.
I let it go. But I kept thinking about the shoes.
She’d started keeping them on under the covers. Light-up sneakers, laces still tied. She said she likes being ready.
A few days later she asked if my bedroom door locks from the inside.
Then at pickup, a gray truck pulled into the lot and she went completely still against my leg until it passed.
Travis drives a gray truck.
“Travis says the counting is just for us two,” she said in the car. “He says Mommy gets sad about it.”
I called Kristen that night. She said Josie’s been making things up since she learned to talk, and that I’ve always liked being the fun one.
I bought their doorbell camera two Christmases ago. My phone was still on the account.
I scrolled back three weeks.
1:40 AM. 2:15 AM. 2:50 AM. Josie on the porch step in her pajamas and her shoes, knees pulled up, waiting.
Four nights.
I had to grip the counter to stay upright. Because in the clip from Sunday the porch light came on behind her, and MY SISTER WAS STANDING IN THE DOORWAY WATCHING HER SIT THERE.
She didn’t open the screen. She went back inside and the light went off.
I walked into Josie’s room at four in the morning. She was awake on top of the covers.
“Mommy taught me the counting,” she said. “She said if I told you, you’d stop letting me come here.”
She Wouldn’t Say What Happened at Eighty-Four
I sat on the edge of the bed.
The mattress squeaked, and Josie’s eyes moved to the door.
“Did Travis teach you the game?”
She shook her head.
“Did he make you lie still?”
Another shake.
The mushroom lamp threw purple spots across her cheeks. She had one sock on. The other foot was bare, gray with dust from the floor.
“Then what happens at eighty-four?”
She pulled the blanket up to her chin.
“That’s when Mommy opens the door.”
I didn’t ask anything else. My mouth had gone dry, and I was suddenly afraid of asking the wrong question in the wrong way. Children remember the shape of an adult’s face. They know when you’ve decided they’re in trouble, even if you haven’t.
I got her a glass of water.
She drank half of it, then put the cup on the windowsill beside a plastic dinosaur and a dried-up purple marker. The water cup with the whale sticker was still on the nightstand, exactly where it had been left.
“Do you want to sleep in my room?”
She looked toward the hall.
“Is your door locked?”
“Not yet.”
“Can you lock it?”
“Yes.”
“Then I want yours.”
So I locked her bedroom door from the inside and sat on the floor with my back against it. Josie lay down in her clothes. Shoes still tied.
At 4:37, she finally closed her eyes.
I didn’t sleep. I watched the little green numbers on the lamp charger change when the cord shifted.
At 6:10, I texted Kristen.
Call me before you bring her home today. We need to talk about Sunday night.
She answered three minutes later.
What are you talking about?
I sent her the clip.
The typing bubble appeared. Disappeared. Came back.
Then she called.
“Why are you saving those?” she asked.
“Why was Josie outside?”
“She wasn’t outside.”
“She’s sitting on your porch at 2:50 in the morning.”
“She sleepwalks.”
“She had her shoes on.”
“Megan.”
Her voice had that clipped hospital tone she used when someone was asking for something she couldn’t give. Kristen had been a nurse for eleven years. She could make a sentence sound like a door closing.
“Did Travis put her out there?”
“No.”
“Did you?”
A pause.
“No.”
“Then why were you standing behind her?”
“I was getting her.”
“You went back inside.”
“Because she came back in.”
“She was sitting on the porch for eleven minutes.”
“She’s six. She doesn’t know how long she was sitting there.”
I looked at Josie. She was awake, staring at the ceiling.
“Come over,” I said.
“I have work.”
“Call in.”
“Don’t tell me how to manage my life.”
“Then tell me how to manage hers.”
The phone went quiet.
After a while, she said, “You always do this.”
“Do what?”
“Take one weird thing and make it the whole story.”
I thought of the shoes. The locked door. The gray truck. Her tiny hand clamped around my calf in the school parking lot.
“Bring her at four,” I said. “And bring Travis.”
“I am not bringing him to your apartment so you can accuse him.”
“Good. Then bring yourself.”
She hung up.
The Notes in the Back of the Drawer
I called my friend Pam before I called anyone else.
Pam works in the front office at Josie’s elementary school. She is the sort of person who knows which copier is broken and which parent has been crying in the bathroom. We met years ago when she mailed a birthday card to the wrong apartment and knocked on my door to get it back.
I told her Josie had been outside at night.
Not everything. I couldn’t make the words come out in the right order.
Pam didn’t interrupt.
When I finished, she said, “Has she said anything at school?”
“I don’t know.”
“Ask for the counselor. Today.”
“Will they call Kristen?”
“They’re supposed to.”
“That’s not what I asked.”
Pam sighed through her nose.
“Megan, if a child says she isn’t safe, adults are required to do something. You don’t get to keep this between sisters because it’s uncomfortable.”
I looked at the closed bedroom door.
“I know.”
“No, you know the sentence. That’s different.”
She gave me the name of the school counselor, Ms. Harlow, and told me to write down dates without asking Josie to repeat herself. She said not to promise secrecy. She said not to call Travis.
I had already called him.
He answered on the fifth ring.
“Hey,” he said. “Everything okay?”
I didn’t like how normal he sounded. I hated myself for noticing that his voice was warm.
“Why does Josie sleep in her shoes?”
A pause.
Then a laugh.
“She does that?”
“Why does she count to eighty-four?”
“Kids make up games.”
“Why was she on the porch at 2:50 Sunday morning?”
This time the pause lasted longer.
“You should ask Kristen.”
“I am asking you.”
“She’s probably sleepwalking. Her dad used to do it.”
“Josie’s dad?”
“Yeah.”
Josie’s father was named Eric. He lived in Ohio and paid child support when his warehouse job allowed it. I had met him twice. He wore a baseball cap indoors and called every birthday two days late.
“Eric sleepwalks?”
“Did.”
“Did he put shoes on?”
Travis stopped laughing.
“Look, Megan, I don’t know what you want from me.”
“I want you to tell me why my niece was outside.”
“She wasn’t my responsibility.”
There it was.
Not an answer. Still, it landed.
I hung up and went into Josie’s room.
Her clothes were folded in the top drawer. Underwear, socks, leggings, shirts with glitter on them. I was looking for nothing in particular, which is how I found the notebook.
It was behind the drawer, wedged against the back panel.
Pink cover. A cartoon cat with one eye covered by a star. On the first page, in thick pencil, Josie had written her name backward.
The next pages held drawings.
A square house. A gray rectangle parked beside it. A small stick girl on the porch.
In one picture, the porch had no door.
In another, the girl was inside a closet. There were numbers written along the wall.
70.
75.
80.
84.
I turned the page.
The drawing after that was a black bed with a yellow face under it.
The words beneath it were shaky but readable.
TRAVIS SAYS DONT MOVE
I took a picture of every page.
Then I called Pam again.
This time she said, “Call child services.”
My fingers had started to shake, so I set the phone on the counter and used both hands to dial.
A woman named Denise asked me questions. Josie’s full name. Her birthday. Her school. Where she was right now. Whether she had injuries. Whether anyone had threatened her.
When I said no, Denise asked, “What did the child tell you?”
I read the words from the notebook.
“Travis says don’t move.”
Denise was quiet for one second.
“Don’t question her further,” she said. “Keep her with you. Do not send her back to that home until an investigator speaks with you.”
“Her mother is coming at four.”
“Then don’t let them leave with her.”
My stomach made a hard, ugly drop.
“I can do that.”
“Can you?”
I looked at the front door, the chain lock, the little brass peephole.
“Yes.”
Kristen Came With the Gray Truck
At 3:48, Travis’s gray truck pulled into the lot.
I saw it from the kitchen window.
Josie was coloring at the table. She had taken off her shoes only because I told her she could put them beside the bed and still be ready.
The crayon stopped in her hand.
“No,” she said.
One word.
I called Denise and left the line open. Then I moved between Josie and the door.
Travis came up the stairs first. Kristen followed him with her purse held tight against her hip. Her hair was still pulled into a hospital bun. She looked tired. She also looked furious.
“Where is she?” Travis asked.
“She’s safe.”
Kristen reached for the doorknob.
I kept my hand on the chain.
“What is this?” she said.
“Child services is on the phone.”
Her face changed so quickly I almost missed it.
Not surprise.
Calculation.
“Give me my daughter.”
“No.”
“Megan.”
“No.”
Travis moved closer to the door.
I could see the top of his head through the peephole.
“Open it,” he said.
Denise’s voice came through my phone. “Do not open the door.”
I put the phone on speaker.
“This is Denise with county child protection. Please step away from the door.”
Travis swore.
Kristen turned toward him. “You said she didn’t write anything down.”
The sentence came through the door.
I didn’t move.
Neither did Josie.
“What did you say?” Travis asked.
Kristen made a small choking sound.
Then Travis said, “You told me she couldn’t read.”
I looked at the notebook on the table. Pink cover. One-eyed cat.
Denise heard it too.
“Ma’am, stay inside and keep the child away from the door.”
A car pulled into the lot below. Then another.
Travis hit the door with the flat of his hand.
Josie dropped the crayon.
“Count,” she whispered.
I turned.
She was staring at me.
“Count what?”
“Don’t let him hear.”
Her lips barely moved.
“One,” she said.
I understood then. The counting wasn’t a game for Travis. It was the thing she had been taught to do while waiting for the door, waiting for him to stop, waiting for the moment she could move again.
“Two,” she said.
Travis hit the door again.
“Three.”
Kristen started crying.
Not loudly. She pressed her fingers beneath her nose and looked at the floor.
“Mommy?” Josie called.
Kristen lifted her head.
“I’m sorry,” she said.
Josie crawled under the table.
“Mommy, you said you were watching.”
“I was watching.”
“Then why didn’t you come?”
Kristen turned toward the door.
“Because he said he’d take you away.”
Travis snapped, “Shut up.”
The word went through the apartment.
Josie stopped counting.
Denise told me the police were there. I heard boots on the stairs. A man’s voice told Travis to put his hands where they could be seen.
The next sound was the truck keys hitting the hallway floor.
The Part Kristen Left Out
The investigators took Josie to a child advocacy center two days later.
They asked me to wait in a room with a fish tank. One orange fish kept swimming into the glass, backing up, and doing it again.
I was there for three hours.
At 5:22, a detective named Carla Ruiz came in. She wore a gray cardigan and had a paper cup of coffee that she never drank.
“Josie told us about the counting,” she said.
I nodded.
“She says Travis made her sit on the porch when he was angry.”
“Why?”
“Because he said she was bad at keeping secrets.”
The detective opened a folder.
“He would come into the room after midnight. He made her lie on the bed and count backward from one hundred. At eighty-four, he told her to stop moving. Then he’d leave.”
“Why eighty-four?”
“He said that was the number of seconds she had to stay still. If she moved, he started over.”
My hands went cold.
“Did he hurt her?”
“She says he grabbed her arm once. There are no marks now. She also said he took pictures of her while she was sleeping.”
I looked down at the table.
There was a ring-shaped coffee stain near my elbow.
“Why didn’t Kristen stop him?”
Carla didn’t answer right away.
“Your sister told us she knew. She said she tried to keep Josie at your apartment on the nights Travis drank.”
“She sent her back.”
“She said Travis threatened to report her for leaving Josie with you. He told her he had pictures of you drinking.”
“I don’t drink.”
“She knows that.”
That was the part I couldn’t fit anywhere.
Kristen had watched the porch. She had known about the counting. She had let me call myself forgetful every night while Josie asked for water she didn’t need, because it gave her a reason to stay awake.
“What about the truck?” I asked.
“Travis took her to a storage unit in it.”
“For what?”
Carla turned a page.
“Josie says he kept a box there. He told her it had her real family inside.”
The fish hit the glass again.
“What’s in the box?”
“Photographs. Letters. A small digital recorder.”
“Did you find it?”
“Yes.”
Carla pushed a photocopy across the table.
It was a handwritten note, folded into a square.
Megan, if you find this, don’t let him take her to Unit 214.
My name was written at the bottom.
Kristen’s handwriting.
“Where did you find that?” I asked.
“In the box.”
I read it twice.
The note was dated April 9.
April 9 was the first week Josie started staying with me.
“Why didn’t she tell me?”
“She says she tried.”
“When?”
Carla looked at the folder.
“She says she told you about the water.”
I thought of those nights. The cup. The whale sticker. My sister’s exhausted face when she dropped Josie off. The way Josie always asked for the same thing after pajamas.
“Aunt Megan, you forgot the water.”
I had believed her.
I had gone to the kitchen. Filled the cup. Returned. Kissed her forehead.
I had not asked why she didn’t get it herself.
Unit 214
The storage place was twelve minutes from my apartment, behind a closed bowling alley on Route 9.
Carla didn’t want me there, but I went anyway because Kristen had asked to see me before her hearing.
She was in a visitation room at the county building. Her wrists were free. Her hair was down for once, and without the hospital bun she looked younger, almost like the sister who used to steal my sweaters.
“I didn’t know how to leave,” she said.
“You knew how to stand in the doorway.”
She flinched.
“I thought if I played along, he wouldn’t – “
“Don’t.”
“I was scared.”
“So was she.”
Kristen nodded.
Her eyes went to the table.
“He made me record the counting.”
“The recorder in the box?”
“Yes.”
“Why?”
“He said if I had proof that Josie was difficult, nobody would believe her.”
There it was. The thing the first guess missed.
He hadn’t been hiding what he did because he thought no one would notice. He had been collecting material to make the child look guilty for being afraid.
“Why did you write my name?”
“Because I knew you’d see it.”
“That isn’t an answer.”
“I couldn’t call you. He checked my phone. I thought if I put it somewhere, maybe you’d find it.”
“You put it in a storage unit.”
“I didn’t know where else.”
“You could’ve left with her.”
“He said he’d hurt you.”
I laughed once. It came out wrong.
“Travis threatened me?”
“He said he knew where you lived.”
“He came to my door.”
“I know.”
“He came because you told him I had the notebook.”
Kristen covered her face.
I looked at her hands. Hospital hands. Short nails. A pale band where her wedding ring had been.
“Did you ever leave her on the porch?”
Her fingers lowered.
“Once.”
“Four nights.”
“I was outside the other three.”
“Watching.”
“I was trying to make him stop.”
“By watching?”
She looked toward the one-way window.
“I stood there until he let me bring her in.”
“But Sunday?”
“I couldn’t open the door.”
“Why?”
“Because he was behind me.”
That stopped me.
Kristen leaned forward.
“He was in the doorway. I didn’t know he was awake. He put his hand on the back of my neck and said if I opened the screen, he’d call the police and tell them I’d abandoned her. He said he’d show them the video of you taking her without permission.”
“You were both inside.”
“I know.”
“And Josie was outside.”
“I know.”
The room had a buzzing light above us. Somewhere in the hall, a printer started and stopped.
“Why didn’t you tell me after?”
Kristen looked at me.
“Because she came back inside and asked me not to.”
“She asked you?”
“She said if I told you, you’d stop taking her.”
The exact words.
The lie had moved through the family like a wire. Travis to Kristen. Kristen to Josie. Josie to me.
But one piece still didn’t fit.
“What was in the box besides the recorder?”
Kristen swallowed.
“A letter from Eric.”
“Her father?”
“Yes.”
“What did it say?”
“He’d filed for custody.”
I sat back.
“Eric filed?”
“He found out Travis was living with us. He said he was coming in May.”
“Why didn’t you tell me?”
“Because Travis found the court papers.”
“And?”
“He said if Eric got custody, he’d tell him everything I let happen.”
I looked at the woman across from me. My sister. The person who had held my hand when our father died. The person who had stood outside a door while her daughter sat on cold concrete in light-up shoes.
“What did you let happen?”
Kristen stared at the table.
“I let him make me afraid of the next thing.”
No neat answer followed.
The county placed Josie with me temporarily. Eric arrived from Ohio on a Thursday morning with two duffel bags and a car seat he had bought at a gas station because he hadn’t expected to be a father in person yet.
He was not the man from the gray truck.
He was shorter than I remembered. His baseball cap had a cracked bill. He stood in my hallway holding a paper sack of coloring books and asked whether Josie liked horses.
“She likes sharks,” I said.
“Okay. Sharks.”
He put the sack down.
Then he sat on the floor outside her bedroom until she decided to open the door.
She didn’t hug him.
She let him show her the shark book.
That was enough for the first day.
After Eighty-Four
Travis took a plea in October.
Kristen went to a separate hearing. She lost custody for now. She has supervised visits on Wednesdays, forty-five minutes in a room with a clock above the door.
Josie still sleeps in my second bedroom.
The purple sheets are gone. She picked yellow ones with tiny black stars. The mushroom lamp broke when she threw a shoe at it, so now she has a plain white lamp from the drugstore.
She keeps the shoes beside the bed.
Not on her feet.
Beside it.
The door stays open unless she closes it herself. I don’t ask why. I don’t ask her to prove she’s okay. I write down what she says, even when it sounds small.
Last Tuesday, she asked me to count.
We were sitting on the carpet, sorting socks. One of mine had disappeared in the wash again.
“To what number?” I asked.
“One hundred.”
My fingers stopped on a child-sized pink sock.
“Okay.”
She leaned against the bed.
I counted.
One. Two. Three.
At eighty-three, she held up her hand.
“Stop.”
I stopped.
She looked toward the hall.
“Now you say, ‘You can move.'”
So I said it.
She put both feet on the floor.
“You can move.”
She stood.
Then she walked to the kitchen, opened the cabinet, and got her own water cup.
The whale sticker had finally peeled off completely. She carried the cup back with the bare plastic side facing out.
“Aunt Megan?”
“Yeah?”
“Next time, don’t forget.”
“I won’t.”
She studied me, deciding whether that was true.
Then she poured the water onto the carpet.
Not a little. The whole cup.
She looked at the spreading wet spot.
“I forgot,” she said.
And for once, she was the one laughing.
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